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I have toyed with the idea of writing a story from the first person point of view, specifically from the point of view of somone whose signifcant other is the object of expansion.  All of my stories thusfar, I think, have been told from the third person.  I'd like some feedback on whether this interferes with the reader's identifying with the story.  I personally, when reading expansion literature have preferred to read expansion stories from the third person, particularly when they are sexually charged.  Not sure why.  Do any of my readers have a preference or opinion on the matter?
  • Listening to: Trombone Shorty
  • Reading: Heavy Weather
  • Watching: the sky

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:icontyrak:
Any chance of posting morphs from your expansion mansion thing, since it's closed?
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Mood: Joy ~rampant404 Feb 10, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Heya, thanks for watching! I'm glad you liked the latest issue, it was a blast to write. And yeah, I think we'll be seeing more of that story (or at least in that vein) at some point...

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:iconburnman08:
Thanks 4 the fav!

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*High-On-Fairydust Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
hey thanks for watchin!

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:iconbts85:
Man, i still miss your morphs, have you done any lately?
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:iconoludadammy:
Biz, I hope your not giving up on your story. I have absolutely loved reading it. Its engaging in the right areas, has interesting characters and the concept is incredibly unique. Please don't stop making these stories. I want to read more from you!
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:iconjames-the-c:
Good job on the Neurohancer story (so far (I hope)). My attention span is usually too small for stories, and my interest in sci-fi is fleeting, but of course, interest in the "main" subject is predominant, and by the time I'd finished the first chapter I was suitably hooked. I have just finished reading it in its entirety, and I couldn't have spent a better hour. :meow:

Keep the writing up! :ohnoes:
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Mood: Joy ~BEgirl69 Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!!

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:iconinisipis:
Hi there! thanks for the:+devwatch:Watch! :iconretardiloveitplz:

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:iconwereodd22:
have a happy holloween

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