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Well this was bound to happen sooner or later. Gina's adventure continues . . .

So better or worse than the original?
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Mood: Joy ~beatlemasterkingkong May 26, 2010
Nice BE story.
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!bigandbusty May 12, 2010
That was way better than the first, lovely job
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*SpiralingStaircase May 10, 2010
My God, that was wildly entertaining! :w00t!:

Top notch, man. More than a worthy sequel, I'd say. :D
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~biz-mark May 10, 2010
Why thank you good sir. Your encouragement is always most appreciated. Honestly I changed a bondage related detail in this a couple nights ago when I considered what it would look like if you were to one day draw a certain scene. It worked out well narratively I think. Besides who would complain about additional butt-expansive description?

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~LuxImperialis May 10, 2010
Definitely better than the original! I tend to prefer these kinds of stories with some onomatopoeia rather than just narration, but your stuff is still really great.

I gotta agree with the other commenter, too. A superhero route in future sequels would be fun. Just future sequels in general, really!
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~biz-mark May 10, 2010
I appreciate it :joy:
For some reason I stayed away from the onomas in this one. I think its cause I'm still not sure what I'm going to do with a super flatulent protagonist. There will be more one way or the other. :D

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~LuxImperialis May 10, 2010
Well, you could always have the A and B versions, one with, one without. :P

But, yeah! I love your Neurohancer stuff too, so as much as I want to see a sequel to this, I know I'll be happy with whatever you put out next. Unless you want to take the best of both, and have that virus start causing gas too. x3
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~Fat-or-Chubby May 10, 2010
Amazing. Better than the original.

You know, a superhero angle on Gina is a great idea...

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A big belly is a happy belly. A small belly is just a cry for help.

Your belly: fill it up, watch it grow. Be good to it, and it'll be good to you.

Add some belly in your life!
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~biz-mark May 10, 2010
Hmmmm, Gina's butt as an agent of social justice ay? I don't know that Gina is the type to entangle herself in property crimes. Though she does have some pretty leftist views of equality. Maybe she will use her new power in the form of super-vandalism . . .
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~Fat-or-Chubby Jun 3, 2010
Well, it's an interesting angle to take the story if you want to.

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A big belly is a happy belly. A small belly is just a cry for help.

Your belly: fill it up, watch it grow. Be good to it, and it'll be good to you.

Add some belly in your life!
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